Burback Squibble

Burback Squibble


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  1. Looks like you got everything in there and have some good visual examples of each organ. I’d like to see more time spent cleaning up the line work to make it more crisp and finished. This feels a little too sketchy to be a final project. Also, play around with typestyles more. This is a little difficult to read, especially with the smaller type. A sans serif font would work better for this. The dark background presents some challenges as well with readability. Try something lighter or perhaps another less saturated color.

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